Saturday, April 17, 2010

NaPoWriMo #17

Nothing like a Saturday with supposedly plenty of free time to write, to induce a bout of extreme procrastination. However, if I'm going to reach the end of the month with a poem a day, I have to get something up quickly, so here goes: (this one is for the readwritepoem prompt to write something inspired by "smells" - in my case, pine)

(All NaPoWriMo poems have now been removed for possible editing and submissions. Contact me if you would like to read them.)

Phew! Done, more or less, and it's not midnight yet. Only thirteen days to go. (And then it will be time for some serious revision)>


Linda Jacobs said...

Love the image of the little girl on her father's shoulders!

Marianne said...

Beautiful images ... lovely words!

Anonymous said...

Great imagery, and the sound of it is superb, rolling along with those bits of repetition and rhyme. Excellent!