an unfamiliar landscape
the journey begins
the wake of the ferry
a thread between islands
More haiku here
Tuesday, July 04, 2006
Journeys
This week's theme for one deep breath: journeys
through the windscreen
an unfamiliar landscape
the journey begins
seabirds follow
the wake of the ferry
a thread between islands
More haiku here
an unfamiliar landscape
the journey begins
the wake of the ferry
a thread between islands
More haiku here
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Oh, these are good :-)
I'm loving this week's prompt (at least the things others have written; haven't gotten to mine yet).
what wonderful photos!
and the thread image..superb.
truly beautiful haikus!
I like both haiku, but especially the second. And both photos are very cool.
Thanks everybody. I'm a bit lazy sometimes, I lifted the "thread between islands" line from an earlier poem. I might put it on my blog sometime.
The car windscreen shot is from a trip to Australia - we were on a motorway overbridge in Brisbane. The other one is the ferry between the North and South Islands of New Zealand, somewhere in the Marlborough Sounds. It's a very scenic journey. I relied on photos already in my collection for this prompt, and came up with haiku to match.
Great haiku - I really love the second.
Lovely images and Haikus! I like "a thread between islands" this is a beautiful word image.
Marvelous haiku! Loved the thread image too :)
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