Sunday, April 18, 2010

NaPoWriMo #18: Elemental

For Neil's prompt at readwritepoem

(All NaPoWriMo poems have now been removed for possible editing and submissions. Contact me if you would like to read them.)

6 comments:

Robin said...

Catherine--Simply beautiful. Great job putting these elements back together, as they belong.

Kay McKenzie Cooke. said...

Beautiful! The last line is superb - the rest leading up to that final plunge!

Ron. said...

Good work recording the overlap, the altogetherness, the linkages. Solid writing.

poemblaze said...

You capture the beauty of the ocean.

Andy Sewina said...

Lovely! I like the image of the Tern stitching the sky to the sea.

concretegodmother said...

really lovely! pushing boundaries, stitching sky to sea. beautiful imagery and excellent stitchwork of your own!