This week's prompt asked us to write poetry inspired by something in a newspaper or magazine - a headline, an article, an advertisement or whatever we chose.
At a workshop a few years back we were also asked to look through magazines for inspiration, so today I am posting the poem I wrote then. The triggers for this included an article on Japanese gardens and an advertisement for health supplements which included photographs of vegetables.
At the time I wrote it my daughter had just finished two years of English teaching in Korea and was visiting Mongolia before returning to New Zealand.
Sonnet
These grey days, I hunger for colour. I scavenge
in produce aisles, take home bags overflowing
with orange-skinned mandarins, broccoli, dark
as pines, purple grapes, tri-coloured capsicums.
I sip herbal tea and read your messages.
Mongolia's as hot as Korea, you say, but drier.
Everywhere is dusty. The vegetable soup is greasy
with mutton fat, and not much fibre in it.
You will pass through Osaka on your way home,
visit temples with gardens of pebbles
and carefully raked sand. By the time you return
the maples in our garden will be swelling with new buds.
The Japanese have a special name for it.
Shinryoku - the tender new green of spring.
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Thursday, October 12, 2006
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13 comments:
Catherine, I felt homesick reading this and knew that you couldn't wait to be home where you would see all the familiar and be comforted..thanks for sharing.. M
This is fabulous, Catherine! I felt like I could see it all unfolding so clearly.
Very lovely poem. I'm there with you!! Beautiful language, word choices!
Beautiful poem. I especially love this part:
Mongolia's as hot as Korea, you say, but drier.
Everywhere is dusty. The vegetable soup is greasy
The juxtaposed images complement each other perfectly.
Great poem. Perfect!
This is wonderful, nostalgic -- reminds me of The River Merchant's Wife (trans. by Pound), and my own Letter to a Friend in China.
Absolutely beautiful! You have used detail like a fine artist on canvas and created a haunting, melancholy mood. Loved it.
I like this - especially the last six lines. Very descriptive, personal.
Lovely poem and I felt you missing her :)
Beautiful poem. I really liked the first stanza and the expression of color. Lovely.
Lovely. The images are very tasty and colourful - love 'broccoli, dark as pines.'
I too love all the contrasts you use - the different colors, the dry vs. greasy, the pebbles and sand contrasted with the maple buds. Beautiful.
This is a beautiful sonnet! I'll be checking back. . . thanks-
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