This one is written for Carolee's prompt, which was to think of a message, attribute it to an unlikely object, repeat at will and then use one of the lines to start a poem. Rather than just using one, I have used a number of different objects in my poem. Although it's autumn here, the poem ended up with a spring feel to it.
As always, this is a rough draft - it feels as if it needs a little more at the end, but I like the way it's heading.
(All NaPoWriMo poems have now been removed for possible editing and submissions. Contact me if you would like to read them.)
Poetry, quilting and random comments on life, the universe and everything
I love what you've done here!
ReplyDeleteI do like the tables and chairs trying to dance.
ReplyDeletenicely done Catherine....thanks for this
ReplyDeleteDelightful poem. What fun! I especially enjoyed the curtains flapping "a message in semaphore".
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