tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post6160306390559391527..comments2024-01-01T21:14:32.790+13:00Comments on Still Standing on her Head: NaPoWriMo #14Catherinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08236329216260906624noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-66699880172631272072010-04-15T13:29:21.145+12:002010-04-15T13:29:21.145+12:00Catherine, beautiful poem. I know you get to see a...Catherine, beautiful poem. I know you get to see a lot of the stars where you are.Irenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12918979903066830662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-38787666372239537912010-04-15T05:46:18.025+12:002010-04-15T05:46:18.025+12:00Wonderful poem. A lot of beautiful phrasing throu...Wonderful poem. A lot of beautiful phrasing throughout.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-78898007973860494052010-04-14T23:10:25.169+12:002010-04-14T23:10:25.169+12:00That lat line is a real clincher. Perfect.That lat line is a real clincher. Perfect.Kay Cookehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01791873464409271216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-61183782084975692382010-04-14T19:19:36.749+12:002010-04-14T19:19:36.749+12:00I love the last three lines. I almost think that:...I love the last three lines. I almost think that:<br /><br /><i>The darkest hour is sometimes before the dawn,<br />but sometimes it is not.<br />In the neon cities, there are those<br />who have never seen the stars.<br />It is never more dark than that.</i><br /><br />could stand as a poem by itself.Zeborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14926206294826622634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-29679924688818190642010-04-14T18:45:23.032+12:002010-04-14T18:45:23.032+12:00I like your part of the beginning, and the end is ...I like your part of the beginning, and the end is wonderful.<br /><br />(noticed your note on rwp about layout. I have problems with wordpress, too. for simple things, sometimes you can set things where you want them with periods or dashes, then change their color to white so they disappear on the page. It's clunky, but always works)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com