tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post5723249180756629319..comments2024-01-01T21:14:32.790+13:00Comments on Still Standing on her Head: NaPoWriMo #25: A Sort of VillanelleCatherinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08236329216260906624noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-6279861148012843762010-04-26T10:28:50.666+12:002010-04-26T10:28:50.666+12:00there's a lot to be sed to form poetry but oh ...there's a lot to be sed to form poetry but oh so much more is had when freedom steps in... to say this is poetic is somehow shy and saying less... it is beautiful <a href="http://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2010/04/25/conduit-connect/" rel="nofollow">conduit connect</a>one more believerhttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2010/04/25/conduit-connect/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-80063559393542957732010-04-25T23:59:15.621+12:002010-04-25T23:59:15.621+12:00This is an interesting variation on the (sometimes...This is an interesting variation on the (sometimes boring) standard villanelle. I like your long first lines. So often, if sticking to the exact form, there doesn't seem enough room to say anything meaningful. I like yours better!vivhttp://vivinfrance.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-32058134327463668682010-04-25T23:31:50.582+12:002010-04-25T23:31:50.582+12:00This works beautifully in my opinion. I have yet t...This works beautifully in my opinion. I have yet to try to write one of these ... maybe one day - meanwhile, I can enjoy the brilliant results of others! I love the way you have played with the whole idea and the rhyming is satisfying to read too - and you didn't overdo it which makes for pleasurable reading.Kay Cookehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01791873464409271216noreply@blogger.com