tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post2605068546551711627..comments2024-01-01T21:14:32.790+13:00Comments on Still Standing on her Head: NaPoWriMo #8Catherinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08236329216260906624noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-7871217128924384442007-04-11T21:05:00.000+12:002007-04-11T21:05:00.000+12:00I empathise both with your attempts to avoid senti...I empathise both with your attempts to avoid sentimentality with this prompt, and with your struggle to fit writing in around everything else you need to do each day! I love the way you have organised this poem, and the way you have messed around with phrasing to create different interpretations of the prompt. This is the kind of poem I would love to be clever enough to have written myself!Piphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11205242741145067573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-65467203021034967762007-04-11T12:06:00.000+12:002007-04-11T12:06:00.000+12:00despite your words to the contrary, these do look ...despite your words to the contrary, these do look effortless. they all have an amazing flow to them and i like the varying items you have come up with here. keep going, keep going (another other words of encouragement).<BR/><BR/>:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-40521924789680078102007-04-11T11:11:00.000+12:002007-04-11T11:11:00.000+12:00I especially liked the way you used the bag of til...I especially liked the way you used the bag of tiles to change the thought: "From innocence to guilt. Or rage."Marcia (MeeAugraphie)https://www.blogger.com/profile/00656288704821106002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-4222075697912275932007-04-11T01:21:00.000+12:002007-04-11T01:21:00.000+12:00Youre going great. And this is just superb.Youre going great. And this is just superb.Janhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08627338108089464863noreply@blogger.com