tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post1566447306201839122..comments2024-01-01T21:14:32.790+13:00Comments on Still Standing on her Head: NaPoWriMo #6Catherinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08236329216260906624noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-36334585060019619812010-04-07T14:09:49.326+12:002010-04-07T14:09:49.326+12:00I love that you didn't tell us how you resolve...I love that you didn't tell us how you resolved the lack of accom. Didn't need it and would've spoiled the effect ...<br /> The journey was the important thing - a great poem. 'Dundee in the dark' has a lovely sound to it.<br />You've achieved a lot of very neat things in this poem.Kay Cookehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01791873464409271216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-39665824461707155682010-04-07T10:58:21.858+12:002010-04-07T10:58:21.858+12:00Catherine,
Quite a lovely piece!
PamelaCatherine,<br />Quite a lovely piece!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-68829419163769411782010-04-07T08:30:21.731+12:002010-04-07T08:30:21.731+12:00Yeah, really enjoyed this and know the feeling all...Yeah, really enjoyed this and know the feeling all too well of not being able to find a bed for the night. Love the way you tied this in with Scott and the Antarctic.Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14765633868539628820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-37233459991255321522010-04-07T08:13:45.923+12:002010-04-07T08:13:45.923+12:00"before a wife and children anchored him to s..."before a wife and children anchored him to shore": clever and strong. (Why not end there?) I loved your attention to detail in this piece, Catherine. It totally transported me. "Keillor's factory" suggested the contemporary Garrison Keillor (who features on the Poetry Foundation website). =)Greg O'Connell Poet in Schoolshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14758452879366685371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-41611739505950960162010-04-07T05:25:50.397+12:002010-04-07T05:25:50.397+12:00Vivid and enjoyable read.Vivid and enjoyable read.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-87702327045223806702010-04-07T04:31:30.022+12:002010-04-07T04:31:30.022+12:00Vivid, crisp, tactile, and very engaging. I liked...Vivid, crisp, tactile, and very engaging. I liked this a heck-of-a-lot Catherine...<br />...rob<br /><a href="http://www.image-verse.com/napowrimo-6-the-cast-the-rise" rel="nofollow"><i>Image & Verse</i></a>rob kistnerhttp://image-verse.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-6204442315087245982010-04-07T02:22:37.442+12:002010-04-07T02:22:37.442+12:00I like what you've done here: the days before ...I like what you've done here: the days before a wife and children anchored him to shore<br /><br />http://thelaughinghousewife.wordpress.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-13414800947754534742010-04-07T02:08:55.857+12:002010-04-07T02:08:55.857+12:00Wonderful sounds and images!Wonderful sounds and images!Robinhttp://rrosenchang.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-44737320711439036102010-04-06T22:23:51.101+12:002010-04-06T22:23:51.101+12:00Thanks for bringing me along. Enjoyed the travelo...Thanks for bringing me along. Enjoyed the travelogue.Ron.http://rlavalette.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-65828241873177302132010-04-06T20:34:22.203+12:002010-04-06T20:34:22.203+12:00So evocative. Lovely piece, Catherine.So evocative. Lovely piece, Catherine.Marisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09556341632433581809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-88868009283499743552010-04-06T20:22:00.681+12:002010-04-06T20:22:00.681+12:00familiar territory for me. lovely!familiar territory for me. lovely!swisshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924594772578153947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-43459244728523622042010-04-06T19:54:27.142+12:002010-04-06T19:54:27.142+12:00I write, nake corrections where necessary and leav...I write, nake corrections where necessary and leave it at that. There's always the next one, and it's a gauge of development...<br />Your poem...<br />The noise some memories make is incredible isn't it?<br />And that feeling of nostalgia can overwhelm.<br />Great piece!Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.com