tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post116061340163765090..comments2024-01-01T21:14:32.790+13:00Comments on Still Standing on her Head: Poetry Thursday: Breaking NewsCatherinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08236329216260906624noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-1160931183381968682006-10-16T05:53:00.000+13:002006-10-16T05:53:00.000+13:00This is a beautiful sonnet! I'll be checking back....This is a beautiful sonnet! I'll be checking back. . . thanks-ren powell https://www.blogger.com/profile/15593358547415514500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-1160753352229785612006-10-14T04:29:00.000+13:002006-10-14T04:29:00.000+13:00I too love all the contrasts you use - the differe...I too love all the contrasts you use - the different colors, the dry vs. greasy, the pebbles and sand contrasted with the maple buds. Beautiful.twilightspiderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338205807151511143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-1160711098723535342006-10-13T16:44:00.000+13:002006-10-13T16:44:00.000+13:00Lovely. The images are very tasty and colourful - ...Lovely. The images are very tasty and colourful - love 'broccoli, dark as pines.'Kay Cookehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01791873464409271216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-1160702385363482242006-10-13T14:19:00.000+13:002006-10-13T14:19:00.000+13:00Beautiful poem. I really liked the first stanza a...Beautiful poem. I really liked the first stanza and the expression of color. Lovely.Emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08058447022953846355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-1160696384839377352006-10-13T12:39:00.000+13:002006-10-13T12:39:00.000+13:00Lovely poem and I felt you missing her :)Lovely poem and I felt you missing her :)Tammy Brierlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-1160695367817675332006-10-13T12:22:00.000+13:002006-10-13T12:22:00.000+13:00I like this - especially the last six lines. Very ...I like this - especially the last six lines. Very descriptive, personal.mareymercyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03407666873261385487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-1160694232640935852006-10-13T12:03:00.000+13:002006-10-13T12:03:00.000+13:00Absolutely beautiful! You have used detail like a ...Absolutely beautiful! You have used detail like a fine artist on canvas and created a haunting, melancholy mood. Loved it.Ms. Dorkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18142940962223526141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-1160687116396440222006-10-13T10:05:00.000+13:002006-10-13T10:05:00.000+13:00This is wonderful, nostalgic -- reminds me of The ...This is wonderful, nostalgic -- reminds me of <A HREF="http://www.poetry-archive.com/p/the_river_merchants_wife.html" REL="nofollow">The River Merchant's Wife (trans. by Pound)</A>, and my own <A HREF="http://www.sbpoet.net/2004/04/letter_to_a_fri.html" REL="nofollow">Letter to a Friend in China</A>.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-1160670007306766392006-10-13T05:20:00.000+13:002006-10-13T05:20:00.000+13:00Great poem. Perfect!Great poem. Perfect!Joyce Ellen Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494251587598676788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-1160666280579802492006-10-13T04:18:00.000+13:002006-10-13T04:18:00.000+13:00Beautiful poem. I especially love this part:Mongo...Beautiful poem. I especially love this part:<BR/><BR/>Mongolia's as hot as Korea, you say, but drier.<BR/>Everywhere is dusty. The vegetable soup is greasy<BR/><BR/>The juxtaposed images complement each other perfectly.michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15684528126514742135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-1160663655847197612006-10-13T03:34:00.000+13:002006-10-13T03:34:00.000+13:00Very lovely poem. I'm there with you!! Beautiful...Very lovely poem. I'm there with you!! Beautiful language, word choices!jzrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05938966640494785871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-1160629804415190452006-10-12T18:10:00.000+13:002006-10-12T18:10:00.000+13:00This is fabulous, Catherine! I felt like I could s...This is fabulous, Catherine! I felt like I could see it all unfolding so clearly.Deb Rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03322863748665701618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-1160626402602322072006-10-12T17:13:00.000+13:002006-10-12T17:13:00.000+13:00Catherine, I felt homesick reading this and knew t...Catherine, I felt homesick reading this and knew that you couldn't wait to be home where you would see all the familiar and be comforted..thanks for sharing.. MAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com