Using the third prompt from Readwritepoem:
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Poetry, quilting and random comments on life, the universe and everything
Poetry, quilting and random comments on life, the universe and everything
Hi, Catherine. What a compelling opening line "It should be huge." And the echo "It should fill the house..." very effective. You're setting yourself a high standard! - Greg =)
ReplyDeleteVery well done.
ReplyDeletefar too frequent and we're sadly jaded by and large -- here in America we have a system called Amber Alert that kicks in quite quickly if a child goes missing. Descriptions hit the broadcast news and the electronic reader boards along the highways -- but still its near epidemic...
ReplyDelete...rob
Image & Verse
It gives me the shivers - as it's meant to do I'm sure - you describe what must be one of the most horrific things to happen to anybody very, very effectively. Powerful.
ReplyDeleteExploding (or is it imploding!?) with emotion; great work - I love it!
ReplyDeletepowerful stuff.
ReplyDelete(this could work for today's promp, too)
A strong image arises from this poem.
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