(All NaPoWriMo poems have now been removed for possible editing and submissions. Contact me if you would like to read them.)
The prompt at Readwritepoem was Intuition. This poem may or may not be on prompt - it is something that came to me in an intuitive way as I was arriving home from work.
Poetry, quilting and random comments on life, the universe and everything
I like the image of ornamental ducks. Nice!
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Nice; bears re-reading several times, to imprint the scene on the mind.
ReplyDeletea lot of wonderful imagery here.
ReplyDeleteWhat a conclusion to draw. A wonderful surprise in a beautiful piece.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem Catherine – the twist at the end is quite a brave move, but it works!
ReplyDeleteOnce again, you're getting better and better as the month goes on. Maybe you should keep going for another month?
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a beautiful sky and river this place where life is born.... a life in the day
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