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Sunday, April 18, 2010

NaPoWriMo #18: Elemental

For Neil's prompt at readwritepoem

(All NaPoWriMo poems have now been removed for possible editing and submissions. Contact me if you would like to read them.)

6 comments:

  1. Catherine--Simply beautiful. Great job putting these elements back together, as they belong.

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  2. Beautiful! The last line is superb - the rest leading up to that final plunge!

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  3. Good work recording the overlap, the altogetherness, the linkages. Solid writing.

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  4. Anonymous1:42 am

    You capture the beauty of the ocean.

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  5. Lovely! I like the image of the Tern stitching the sky to the sea.

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  6. really lovely! pushing boundaries, stitching sky to sea. beautiful imagery and excellent stitchwork of your own!

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