tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post9178246115524069527..comments2024-01-01T21:14:32.790+13:00Comments on Still Standing on her Head: Big Tent Poetry: ReferentialCatherinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08236329216260906624noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-30450149931544729712010-12-13T05:20:25.077+13:002010-12-13T05:20:25.077+13:00Yes, yes, yes. That final line is quite stirring.
...Yes, yes, yes. That final line is quite stirring.<br /><br />(and you asked about the "She" in my poem about the Ventura afternoon. "She" was the baby of the woman in the poem. I left it vague on purpose so that the reader could make the "She" into whomever she felt it was... rather than tie it into a bow at the end. I have lost many people lately and the "She" actually mirrors more than just that baby, now that I think about it. More like the death of who the woman was... interesting. Didn't even know until you asked.Julie Jordan Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06558015761690505791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-51884364714625299032010-12-12T12:24:49.473+13:002010-12-12T12:24:49.473+13:00A poem filled with suspense, yet the imagery was d...A poem filled with suspense, yet the imagery was delicately drawn.<br />Areally interesting tale.marianvhttp://Marianv.blog.co.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-43468833058217347852010-12-11T14:17:44.617+13:002010-12-11T14:17:44.617+13:00nicely done......thanks for thisnicely done......thanks for thisWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-24147283593814341912010-12-11T14:02:05.230+13:002010-12-11T14:02:05.230+13:00Vivid description with an eerie feel... love the s...Vivid description with an eerie feel... love the surprise ending!<br /><br />I'd love to be included in your drawing-- thanks!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-87082680423007128312010-12-11T09:38:55.326+13:002010-12-11T09:38:55.326+13:00Incredibly fine piece of work - chilling and redem...Incredibly fine piece of work - chilling and redemptive, too! I'd love to be in the draw - thank you!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-14033939628884180752010-12-11T06:52:20.377+13:002010-12-11T06:52:20.377+13:00Wow...wow...this is great.
And please add my name...Wow...wow...this is great.<br /><br />And please add my name. Lovely idea!Robinhttp://www.robin-turner.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-36977214266454214702010-12-11T04:22:42.962+13:002010-12-11T04:22:42.962+13:00Enjoyed the story. Those details you scatter thro...Enjoyed the story. Those details you scatter through really bring it to life (and death). Fox is a great witness for such deeds.<br /><br />Please do add my namebarbarahttp://briarcat.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-55818596880992533492010-12-11T03:15:18.019+13:002010-12-11T03:15:18.019+13:00Such an exciting poem, which moves at a breathless...Such an exciting poem, which moves at a breathless pace. Gold, silver, bodies and graveyards - a terrific story.<br /><br />Yes please, put me in the draw!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-77601681122626037682010-12-11T02:49:32.537+13:002010-12-11T02:49:32.537+13:00Great image, that opened eye!
Spellbinding look a...Great image, that opened eye!<br /><br />Spellbinding look at the underworld. Inventive use of the borrowed words.<br /><br />(And yes, would love to be in the hunt for the Chook Book!)Debhttp://stoneymoss.org/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-5009326288219894572010-12-10T23:48:42.791+13:002010-12-10T23:48:42.791+13:00Yes, i'd love to go in the draw for Flap (love...Yes, i'd love to go in the draw for Flap (love the title).Mary McCallumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07482261103185786111noreply@blogger.com