tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post6264514935873685741..comments2024-01-01T21:14:32.790+13:00Comments on Still Standing on her Head: Big Tent Poetry: Dead Woman PoemsCatherinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08236329216260906624noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-38999827766820549572010-12-19T14:50:47.546+13:002010-12-19T14:50:47.546+13:00This feels so magical to me. Wonderful write!
de...This feels so magical to me. Wonderful write!<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/12/dead-man-and-his-shoe-painting.html" rel="nofollow">dead man and his shoe painting</a><br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/12/dead-man-and-his-bottle-of-wine.html" rel="nofollow">dead man and his bottle of wine</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-47730578869675344902010-12-19T11:12:23.873+13:002010-12-19T11:12:23.873+13:00You created an enchanting world in the first poem,...You created an enchanting world in the first poem, and then completely turned it on its head in the second. That two-ways-of-looking is an essential part of the form, I think, and you nailed it. Love the way your enjambments turned out too!Joseph Harkerhttp://namingconstellations.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-9847501477363187542010-12-19T10:45:13.715+13:002010-12-19T10:45:13.715+13:00I love how the second section is so airy and light...I love how the second section is so airy and light. What excellent work this is. I really enjoyed this and am about to go back for seconds.nanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03445777687088584603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-65500427779309845052010-12-19T09:59:59.326+13:002010-12-19T09:59:59.326+13:00nicely done.....would be great to hear you read i...nicely done.....would be great to hear you read it.....thanks for sharingWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-16389982164044359392010-12-19T08:10:39.706+13:002010-12-19T08:10:39.706+13:00"The dead woman contemplates the worms" ..."The dead woman contemplates the worms" -- what a great contrast from how the birds are after the worms!! wonderful!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-58593098982174992412010-12-19T07:26:50.937+13:002010-12-19T07:26:50.937+13:00Very well thought out and written. As a lover of w...Very well thought out and written. As a lover of wings and feathers, I was drawn immediately into your imagery. And loved the fulfillment found in the second poem. Beautifully accomplished,<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-73802769124153042162010-12-19T07:09:16.281+13:002010-12-19T07:09:16.281+13:00this was beautiful to read and to experience the e...this was beautiful to read and to experience the emotion within...Cynthia Shorthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12386358503730817278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-72948411318049190772010-12-18T22:32:30.587+13:002010-12-18T22:32:30.587+13:00This is my favourite of all the poems to this prom...This is my favourite of all the poems to this prompt.<br /><br />BTW did you mean scritch-scratching? Otherwise, maybe you're writing in Czech or Polish!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-70992144027390927192010-12-18T18:39:48.749+13:002010-12-18T18:39:48.749+13:00Very nicely done. I like how the
2nd part complem...Very nicely done. I like how the <br />2nd part complemented the first.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-47755016655362734172010-12-18T16:58:36.200+13:002010-12-18T16:58:36.200+13:00I'm impressed with this piece - it has a lovel...I'm impressed with this piece - it has a lovely flow and the imagery is truly vivid.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-60602976831845585402010-12-18T15:56:29.192+13:002010-12-18T15:56:29.192+13:00I really enjoyed what you did with this. Such a g...I really enjoyed what you did with this. Such a gentle feel to it all...Radio Nowherehttp://radio-nowhere.org/nb/noreply@blogger.com