tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post1144433372997565389..comments2024-01-01T21:14:32.790+13:00Comments on Still Standing on her Head: Tuesday Poem: View, by Christina StachurskiCatherinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08236329216260906624noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-81041394350875089272011-02-03T06:59:08.652+13:002011-02-03T06:59:08.652+13:00Very bittersweet... I think it's unfair that t...Very bittersweet... I think it's unfair that the two of you (and two more) should have a little talent collective. But thank you for sharing the wealth. :)Joseph Harkerhttp://namingconstellations.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-28581412871092349692011-02-02T08:19:34.487+13:002011-02-02T08:19:34.487+13:00Yes, those lines Elizabeth quotes are very strong ...Yes, those lines Elizabeth quotes are very strong and will stay with me. I also love the ending - the single word 'now' - a carpe diem cry.Mary McCallumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07482261103185786111noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-54984285090782113512011-02-01T23:52:27.911+13:002011-02-01T23:52:27.911+13:00I liked the contrast between the implied edges of ...I liked the contrast between the implied edges of the stones and the blurring drifts of flowers, punctuated by the yew trees.Kathleen Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07645566938871914385noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-80710695014281664292011-02-01T21:04:49.984+13:002011-02-01T21:04:49.984+13:00It does have a lingering, elegiac quality--fitting...It does have a lingering, elegiac quality--fittingly, given the subject matter!Helen Lowehttp://helenlowe.info/blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24246495.post-57293364265936858612011-02-01T20:35:38.991+13:002011-02-01T20:35:38.991+13:00I find the lines, 'the lines of lives once chi...I find the lines, 'the lines of lives once chisel sharp have lost their edge' very moving and almost haunting. It seems that these lines could encapsulate the whole poem. Lovely to have a poetry group, Catherine!Elizabeth Welshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15420253723750754324noreply@blogger.com